Dominus Rising

DakPreta1
Minis by DAK, photo by BHR

A Darker Vision

Back after I’d completed work on Starterbook: Wolf and Blake, I had several brainstorm chats with then-line developer Herb. We fleshed out a lot of the ‘hidden’ actions of certain characters within the Word of Blake’s Manei Domini faction, especially that of my (at the time) newly created Opacus Venatori and their multi-layered leader, Berith.

Working with the Jihad timeline we were continually constructing at the time, we formulated a few key events that found their way into the background of later products.

In 2012, shortly before Herb was pushed out of the LD position, we’d begun work on fleshing out the storyline and important faction details that would lead to the 3250 setting we were devising. (Not anymore, mind: that entire idea and setting has since been scrapped, for various reasons I won’t rehash here.)

One of the major points I pushed hard for was the re-emergence of the Word of Blake as a primary foe going into the post-3250 era. That meant an evolution of sorts for the faction, so I sketched out my own thoughts on how that would come to pass.

Casting Light on Shadow

Now that I’m completely severed from the line – and that those story plans have been thoroughly trashed – there’s no harm in sharing what my thoughts and ideas were regarding this defunct bit of worldbuilding, including my perceived take on the fate of Berith, his merry band of villains, and the sinister Word of Blake.

(Note that some of the info here conflicts with later published product. Such is reality versus creative brainstorming.)

Enjoy.

Berith and the Exile: (Originally outlined in 2008; additional details added 2013.)

  1. The OV suffers the loss of Portia Thomas during the battle on Gabriel’s moon; a few others are injured, but the unit survives nearly unscathed. (Berith does face down Church again, but to no clear winner. Instead, he uses the opportunity to lure out and kill Stryker, removing the traitor from the Word of Blake’s heart.)
  1. Thomas’ loss is not made up during the unit’s subsequent redeployment to Glengarry (mentioned in Berith’s TRO75 notable); Marita takes it personally and begins to whisper her discontent. To her POV, the Opacus MD are getting better treatment and replenishment, while the Venatori “Frails” are getting the shaft. (This isn’t true, per se, but because of Kari’s bitterness, it becomes truth to her.) Her grumblings become more and more frequent.
  1. Berith leads his Opacus and assassinates the Bounty Hunter. Shortly afterwards, Berith personally kills Chandresekhar Kurita, who had hired the BH to protect him. Berith commands Kendali to “finish them off,” giving her leave to hunt and kill the remaining members of the Hunter’s crew on the planet. With that command, Berith also orders Kendali to take up the BH’s mantle and to watch for an opportunity in the future to relieve Stone of his life. Kendali becomes the next Bounty Hunter and recruits three loyal Light of Mankind operatives as her team; these operatives voluntarily accept cybernetics and “ascend” into MD-hood. They hunt down and kill all surviving members of the previous Hunter.
  1. In 3076, Marita fails in a mission for a critical second; an ambush meant to take out Berith fails only due to the sacrifice of Mi Tomitaki in her Malak, who intercepts the killing shot and dies from internal injuries and brain seizure. Later, as Berith analyzes the data, he notices Marita’s critical failure; coupled with her supposedly quiet whisperings and rumblings, he decides to fix the problem.
  1. After long analysis, Berith concludes the Frails of his OV unit are no longer pure and corrupted just like the rest of humanity. (It had been his deep desire to ‘reclaim’ these six without subjecting them to MDism; his ‘social experiment’ has failed.) During a critical point in a battle on Isesaki, he orders his Opacus to execute the Venatori for their treachery to the MD order. Four of the five remaining Hunters die, caught between the Opacus and their enemies. Bryn Rivenschild is severely injured and, because of the extent of his injuries, is welcomed into the Manei Domini. He replaces Tomitaki’s slot within the Opacus. Not surprisingly, none of the Opacus question their leader.
  1. Berith meets up with Avitue post-76, filling Kendali’s open slot with the Opacus.
  1. At some point, Berith manages to meet with Apollyon for the last time on Gibson, reclaiming Appy’s key and receiving final orders to go into Exile, taking as many of the Filii as possible. He is given command of the remains of the 52nd, which now numbers less than two Level IIs. After word of Apollyon’s death, Berith takes overall command of the Manei Domini and issues Code Omicron, signaling a massive withdrawal of all MD units from the Inner Sphere.
  1. The Opacus is attacked by a hunter squad from the Fidelis on Caph; Achillius manages to lure the squad away from Berith and leads them on a long rabbit trail, which ultimately ends in his and his pursuer’s deaths.
  1. Berith is joined by the remains of the 48th, including Precentor Rimmon. The 48th brings with them a battered Thera-class WarShip and survivors of the fighting in the Federation. The WarShip becomes a refugee vessel. At this time, however, Berith learns (discovers) of another pursuing Fidelis hunter squad. He gives orders for Avitue and Rimmon to head towards the Capellan hidden world. Berith then disbands his Opacus, giving orders to Rufus to act as the fleeing refugee’s Blakist spiritual advisor (a role he knows well). He also orders Cazer to melt into the population [somewhere where we can sow some chaos between the forming ROTS and Capellan or Marik worlds]. He then reassigns a few MD who are nearer to death (mortal wounds or growing psychosis) to himself and sets out to entrap and kill the Fidelis team.
  1. Sometime in 3083-5, Berith manages to escape the clutches of several MD-hunter squads and finally return to the hidden world to carry out Apollyon’s final orders for the Order of Dominus. He brings with him a total of 2-3 more Level IIs of various MDs, most from the shattered 40th.
  1. Kendali, masquerading as the Bounty Hunter, almost manages to assassinate Devlin Stone, failing only due to a faulty detonator circuit. The ensuing blast fails to catch Stone before he finds cover; the Bounty Hunter is killed during her attempted escape, though she manages to wipe out the rest of Stone’s Fidelis bodyguard unit in a massive explosion.
  1. Berith undergoes surgery and his VDNI is removed. He declares himself the Shadow Primus, with Avitue designated as Precentor Martial/ROM. The operation is mostly successful, though Berith suffers a stroke shortly after and is confined to a wheelchair. Out of respect for their new leader, all Domini have their VDNI and DNI implants removed as well; less than half of them remain in service as pilots.
  1. Cazer manages to link up with several former LIC and ROM operatives now displaced from The Republic’s new intelligence services. The group forms the Curaitis Organization, designed to “watch the watchers.” Cazer slowly builds her own secret network, funneling information back to Berith and the hidden Domini.
  1. In the mid-90s, the Word of Blake transfers most of its leadership and core functions to the Eryines. It still maintains a presence on the last remaining Hidden world, deep underground. The Eryines and its escort of WarShips moves periodically across the Periphery, mostly through systems that were charted by IE and classified as dead.
  1. In 3101, Berith dies from another stroke. However, his Triple Core Processor remains active and is removed from his body. The TCP is attached to a mainframe and is revered as an oracle. The new Shadow Primus, Coraline, takes the Ascended name of Anahel and begins expanding the MD’s shadow network of intelligence through the Curaitis Organization and IE (through several dummy corporations and shell organizations). The Shadow Oracle, as Berith’s alternate AI comes to be known, now functions as a key advisor to the transformed leadership group. Over the decades, the Oracle’s AI is merged with that of the Eryines‘ internal network.
  1. The transformed Word of Blake remains dormant and slowly evolves, preparing for an eventual emergence post-3250, after the Third League collapses with internal strife and violence, partially instigated by the shadow empire.
Advertisements

13 thoughts on “Dominus Rising

  1. In the chaos of the collapsing Third League, the greatly expanded, and enhanced hyperspace deterrent that originally formed the core of the Republic’s “Fortress Republic” Protocol—now fully automated—is subverted by Word of Blake forces during their attempted coup. The fighting, just as destructive as their first Jihad, eventually turns against Blake’s remnant. Fighting another losing battle, as the Word’s second Jihad comes to a crashing close, the Oracle’s super-intelligence system, having already subverted the Wall, releases the system to function autonomously—a parting gift by the Word during their final demise—leaving all IFF protocols and system control passwords erased. “Berith’s Gift,” as it’s known, created a massive hyperspace wall around former Republic/Hegemony space, inducing a virtual “black hole” for hyperspace travel that locked the most valuable and fought over of humanity’s worlds away from the Inner Sphere—ostensibly forever. Unbeknownst to those outside the new wall, JumpShips can, and do, still enter, they just can’t escape. Cut off from the rest of the Inner Sphere, the worlds caught in the Gift’s grasp descend deeper in chaos and unending warfare. Technology, once at the pinnacle of human offering, disintegrates, its scraps fought over by the survivors. Those outside the new wall, ever interested in the mystery of what lies behind it, run one foolish errand after the next to explore its depths.

    Entering the former Republic is a one way trip into hell.

      1. Well, I left out the bit about the talking Berith head, and I glossed over the mechanics behind Clarion/Fortress. 🙂 If you have the time, you should detail the bits and pieces regarding the fall of the Third League, the war against the Adder/Homeworld Collective, the rise of the new Great Houses, etc. I mean, leave no stone unturned my friend!

        I loved how the League consolidated military manufacturing to worlds within the rebuilt Hegemony to keep those uppity pseudo-House Lords for usurping power from the League’s new ruling line—only to see those same manufacturing centers either destroyed during the Word’s war, or lost to the hyperspace bubble after…

        3250 beneath the Pax Habeas-Rome would have been glorious.

  2. Read on Herb’s Facebook that CGL had a lot of accounting problems. Sorry that they lost you, but totally understand why you left. Too bad we won’t see this, because it is awesome.

  3. That was a very promising story arc. Sorry we had to lose it. But, completely understand the situation you were in. Had a similar situation at one time. May your future endeavors be fruitful!

  4. After reading Wolf and Blake, I’d always hoped that there would be more stories about Berith and the OV. There were some great character hooks there, and reading the above gives me a glimpse into what could have been.

    The Black Widows also had some great characters; were there ever any future plans for those?

    1. Yes, but Schmetzer left a while back and never followed up. I know he had some stories to tie in, but….well, same reason I left (and then some). AFAIK, he never wrote them down or discussed those ideas with me.

  5. Thx for sharing. A fascinating look at what (officially) might have been. I appreciate your creative talents and that you have done for the troubled franchise that is BattleTech. 🙂

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s